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Monday 25 November 2013

Adding Detail To Sentences

W.A.L.T,  Adding Different Sentences to the Beginning, Middle and End.


At camp Bentzon Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.



Mr Jacobsen was our coach which was good  on the confidence course.


Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course which was climbing activities.


As we were on the beach  I was nervous about sailing on camp.

I was nervous because I didn't listen about sailing on camp.

I was nervous about sailing on camp because I have never done it before



On a sunny day We went abseiling.

We went abseiling because it was one of our activities


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