Re-Crafting

To day we practiced re-fracting a piece of writing.The first paragraph belongs to Aldora and the second is mine.

Today we practiced re-crafting a piece of writing. The first paragraph belongs to Aldora and the second belongs to Jordenne and mine.

Aldora’s Cross Country Recount

“Cross country, Cross country” is the worst event ever. I would never dream about cross country. Today is cross country and I am not feeling good. But I  just want to support my team TE ARAWA.  “GO TE ARAWA” I said quietly to myself.

Jordenne and Mao's
“Cross country”! This is the worst event ever!!! Why would I dream about this? I know I will just have to do it anyway,and try not to come last

Using Tidy Tens

The Snowy Day

Transforming the landscape, light and fluffy snow lakes tumble like a feather. Sprinkling over the ground, it dissolves slowly. Pristine whiteness covers the city.
Skidding and sliding the cars slipped and slide along the road. There were broken trees filled with ice It was freezing cold the powers were cut and school's over for the day.

Candy Dragon

In a busy Chinese market there was an old man that melted sugar in a pan. Scooping and dripping the hot sugar on to a flat peace of paper, he drew a dragon. Carefullyp he placed a stick onto the design and made a lollipop.

The Massive Hippo

As the small boat passed y the hippos,a massive beast leapt up to devend its territory.Gathering speed,the tourist boat sped away from the advancing hippos.Surprisingly,hippos are the second most deadly wild animal.

My Holiday

My family and I went to the beach and sat under the tree then we ate. After that I went for a swim with my brother, we had a fantastic day at the beach. When arriving back home I was surprised to come back home to see our puppy sleeping. The next day I was sick and sad,and not feeling good.

Cricket

Running over the opisition line,we scored a home run and cheered .

Outside on the field,we got ready to play cricket.

Carefully throwing the ball towards the target , it smashed down.