Monday, 29 October 2012

Narrative Story

Sammy is 18 years old. He lives in France, he loves to tease BULLS by using a red rope to tie around his white clothing ,and on his hips.

The people were clapping for Sammy but the moment he jumped, up he felt scared and he had butterflies in his stomach. Sammys mum was watching. She didn't care. His WHOLE family didn`t CARE.

As Sammy was jumping in the air, he looked down and he saw the BULL, a bull that has SHARP HORNS.He screamed very very loud “AAAHHHH” His mum now became frightened seeing her own son doing something dangerous.

It was too late the bull was going for Sammy. It was the end of his life.  BUT all of a sudden nine men went with a big blue mat and they laid it there for Sammy to fall on it.

Clapping and cheering, Sammy landed safely. His mum said “OOh Sammy I thought you were gonna DIE but you didn't” “That's good” said Sammy “Lets go home” said mum.

Wednesday, 24 October 2012

Narrative Story

Standing on the rock at the beach called Point England Reserve I was cold. A girl from my school was there her name was Lilly she  went for a swim I saw her with her togs and goggles she was probably my age but I don't know. She had come with her brother he looked like a five year old.

As they were walking towards the water Lilies shoe SUNK right through the sand so she looked around and screamed very very loud HELP! So I had a little think in my head. Brother Dan  ran to the park so I had a think in my head  should I help her or not? I made my decision, I should go and help her.

Walking up to her, I was scared and she kept screaming HELP! Her little brother was still playing on the park so I held her on the arm and pulled but she said to me  “Who are you?” I said “Hello I`m Sally and my last name is Palm. What is your name?”I said “Well my name is Lilly and thats my little brother Dan.” OOHHH!

“Anyways thanks for helping me get out of this yucky  sand” Lilly was feeling really happy that she got out of the YUCKY sand.But for me I was feeling happy too because I had helped her. So I said to her “Do you wanna go for a swim?”  “Yes.” replied Lilly “Well lets go.” And we had so MUCH FUN! playing tiggy on the sand.

Friday, 19 October 2012

Halloween Story

Me and my friend were fighting over a bucket of Halloween lollies. It was sort of STUPID and  embarrassing I. tried pulling, but my friend’s hand was really tight on the bucket handle. I said “please can I just hold it” My hands nearly slipped off but I kept pulling until the bucket was starting to crack I said “Give it or it will break and the lollies will spill on the ground and I will be upset with you” so I just pushed my friends fingers off and I started running back home eating the lollies.

Monday, 15 October 2012

Wordle Writing

This is what we did on the first day of term 4,We figured out a QUESTION,The question was WHAT IS A TOY? Well a toy is something you play with and something you buy and all sorts of things you
can do with a toy.So that's what we did with Miss King it was HEAPS OF FUN!!!