Re-Crafting

To day we practiced re-fracting a piece of writing.The first paragraph belongs to Aldora and the second is mine.

Today we practiced re-crafting a piece of writing. The first paragraph belongs to Aldora and the second belongs to Jordenne and mine.

Aldora’s Cross Country Recount

“Cross country, Cross country” is the worst event ever. I would never dream about cross country. Today is cross country and I am not feeling good. But I  just want to support my team TE ARAWA.  “GO TE ARAWA” I said quietly to myself.

Jordenne and Mao's
“Cross country”! This is the worst event ever!!! Why would I dream about this? I know I will just have to do it anyway,and try not to come last

Using Tidy Tens

Usain Bolt-Best Runner

As the race was about to begin, Usain Bolt was balanced on the blocks. Visualising the race, he was focused and ready. Can he WIN!!!

Flying down his lane lightning bolt was filled with great strength. Focused on the finish, he was fired up to win the gold.

As Usain blitzed the race, the crowd went wild!!! What is his future??? With pride in his achievements, Bolt represented Jamaica.

Thanks Panasonic

Did you know that room thirteen WON the competition in the top twenty of the storyboard and the movie. A man called Paul came to Point England School to give room thirteen`s prize that prize was amazing and it was a camera and a microphone to use for the camera.

Thank you very much Panasonic and most of all Paul thank you for giving us the camera and microphone. A BIG THANKS TO PAUL AND PANASONIC!!!