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Tuesday 4 February 2014

Second Day of School

Made it to school,had to walk and walk back home, I really LOVE my class room and teacher her name is Miss Clark she is really kind, yesterday when I came to school I was really shy and scared because I was not in the same class with my friends, we did work activities then a little bit of writing and then morning tea I really enjoy my class with my teacher and new friends.


1 comment:

Quziyah said...

Hi Mao,
It's great to see you blogging about your second day of school. I really liked how you said that you really enjoyed your class with your teacher and new friends. I think you really need to proof read and edit your story as you have left out a lot of punctuation. You also haven't written down enough information for the reader to read. Keep on trying!!!

Quziyah:)

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