Tuesday, 6 August 2013

The Three Little Pigs.

Once Upon A Time there were Three Little Pigs that said good bye to their mother because they were leaving to build their own hous. For them to live in also for them to  grow up in and seek their own fortune as they are living by their own selves

The first  little Pig went to buy hay from an old  lady  then went back to the place  and  built a house quick and easy for her  to live in.

Then the big bad wolf smelt bacon and knocked on the door with a big KNOCK KNOCK  then said.“Little Pig,Little Pig let me come in” growled the big bad  Wolf  “NO Not by the hairs of my chinny chin chin” said the scared little Pig  “Then I  will HUFF and I'll PUFF and I  will BLOW your house down” then the big bad wolf blew the whole house down  and ate the Piglet all up and came out with blood all over his mouth then wiped it with his paws.

The Second little Pig built a house with sticks and the little pig thought it was stronger,  then built the house and sat down to relax along came  the big bad Wolf then  knocked on the door and said “Little  pig Little pig let me come in” then the pig said “no not by the hairs on my chinny chin chin”.
“Then I will huff and I'll Puff and I will BLOW your house down” then he blew it all down, the  big bad wolf  smelt  Ham.

Suddenly the big bad wolf   found the little pig and  ate the little piglet all up and as the big bad wolf finished he came out with an enormous big TUMMY  and wiped the blood off its mouth from the little piglet.

The third pig thought he was brainy, so he went and buyed bricks off an old man  then went back and built the house.

The the big bad wolf knocked on the door and said   “Little Pig,Little Pig let me come in”  “No not by the hairs of my chinny chin chin” Replied the little Pig “ok then” said the big bad wolf “Then I'll huff and i'll puff and i'll blow your house down”.

The wolf huffed and puffed and blew but still the pig  house did not fall because it was made
out of brick then the wolf blew and still it did not fall then the wolf climbed through the chimney
and slided down.

The little pig put a pot of HOT water then as the the big bad wolf slided down he burnt his bottom in the pot and SCREAMED then ran away and the little pig was happy and  lived happily ever after in his big brick house.

1 comment:

Mao said...

Hello, Mao

I think my picture was GREAT also I think I like the sentences because it is long.

I think I could of done better at making sure the sentences were in the right place.

Next I need to work on making it make sence and doing more punctuation.

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